Ha. I'm nervous.

In any case, I decided to open up a thing where I can post the scribbles to Without Void so I can get some feedback on it. This is the test run, and I'm only putting up the first chapter for public viewing.

This is what I want:

- Constructive criticism.
- If you liked it, why?
- Insight to when things are confusing, or when there was a hitch in the read.
- Anything you might deem helpful.

This is what I don't want:

- Criticism for the sake of criticism.
- A bunch of 'omg, this rocks' or in turn a bunch of 'omg, this sucks'.

I think you get the idea. If you want to continue reading the rest of the story, you'll have to friend me, and I'll friend you back. I will probably do this to a certain point, in the off chance that a lot of people want to read it (HAHAHA I'm so funny) and so forth. Also, don't mention the funny dark lines in the pencilled pages cos I had to put two scans together and was too lazy to get rid of it. It'll obviously be gone when I ink/color it.

Thanks in advance for your participation.
( Without any further stalling... )